The Inside Scoop about the University of California Essay Prompt #1

126,000 single applications received by the University of California (UC) system for Fall 2012 Freshman admissions.  That means at least 252,000 essays were written and included within those applications.   (Mind you: These numbers are only for unduplicated applications, and DO NOT include that each application may have ben considered by multiple UC campuses.)   In this sea of essays, how does a candidate distinguish and give the greatest understanding possible of their life experiences,  so the UC admissions reader can make the most informed decision possible?

The first step is to KNOW THE PROMPT, BACKWARDS AND FORWARDS.  Then, you’ll brainstorm needed information, fit that content within the outline defined by the prompt, and editing will help make your story as sharp and understandable as possible by the final draft–without having to add information at the last minute, realizing you’re not answering the prompt.

Listen to us define the UC Prompt #1:

Describe the world you come from and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. 

For more on the UC Essays, listen to “Unlocking the University of California Application Essay Prompt #2” or contact us–[email protected]–for editing to shape the most competitive essay possible, amongst the hundreds of thousands of applicants expected again this fall.

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About Jill Yoshikawa, Ed M, Partner of Creative Marbles Consultancy

Jill Yoshikawa, EdM, Harvard ’99, a seasoned, 25 year educator and consultant, is meticulous in helping clients navigate all aspects of the educational experience, no matter the level of complexity. She combines educational theory with experience to advise families, schools and educators. A UCSD and Harvard graduate, as well as a former high school teacher, Jill works tirelessly to help her clients succeed.
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