How College Essay Writing Really Works

First, students try and organize their thoughts, often encountering writer’s blocks:

After bailing out their thoughts, finally underway with drafting then students encounter:

And, then in frustration, this results:

Much to the consternation of their parents.


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About Jill Yoshikawa, Ed M, Partner of Creative Marbles Consultancy

Jill Yoshikawa, EdM, Harvard ’99, a seasoned, 25 year educator and consultant, is meticulous in helping clients navigate all aspects of the educational experience, no matter the level of complexity. She combines educational theory with experience to advise families, schools and educators. A UCSD and Harvard graduate, as well as a former high school teacher, Jill works tirelessly to help her clients succeed.
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