Just Start Yapping: Why Rambling is the First Step to a Great College Essay

Many students think the first draft of their college essay must be perfect. The truth? Writing begins with a mess.

Start by “yapping”—rambling in a Google Doc, voice note, or even a notebook. Talk about what frustrates you, what excites you, what keeps showing up in your life. The ideas don’t have to make sense yet.

One student started “yapping” about his knee injury and the loss of his identity as an athlete. What seemed like a rant turned into a powerful reflection using the five stages of grief—anger, denial, and finally acceptance. That structure only emerged after the messiness.

You’re not trying to sound impressive right away. You’re trying to uncover what matters. Sometimes your reflections will reveal patterns—like a student who realized generosity showed up in both tutoring and sharing Minecraft gameplay online. Themes are discovered, not declared.

Start with a memory. A struggle. A question. Write how you speak. Edit later. Just yap now.


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About Jill Yoshikawa, Ed M, Partner of Creative Marbles Consultancy

Jill Yoshikawa, EdM, Harvard ’99, a seasoned, 25 year educator and consultant, is meticulous in helping clients navigate all aspects of the educational experience, no matter the level of complexity. She combines educational theory with experience to advise families, schools and educators. A UCSD and Harvard graduate, as well as a former high school teacher, Jill works tirelessly to help her clients succeed.
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